Henrykowie, część 1
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Komentarze (18)
Wrócę do opka trochę później, zapowiada się ciekawie :)
Jest inny, ciekawy, w wolnej chwili odświeżę :)
Całkiem dobrze opisujesz samą bitwę, choć tez nie jestem pewien o jaką chodzi, a nie chcę strzelać.
Jak byś chciał poczytać gościa, który wręcz genialnie (przynajmniej dla mnie) opisuje podobne czasy poszukaj Nazaretha i jego opowiadania „Bracia Wilcy” To tak gdzieś X wiek, ale czyta się znakomicie.
Jak już pisałem to nie moje czasy, ale czytało mi się całkiem dobrze. Wplatasz staropolszczyznę co robi dobry efekt i nastrój. Jeśli masz inne takie teksty, to wstawiaj, bo jest tu kilku chętnych do czytania o tych już dość zamierzchłych czasach. To na tyle, bo nie mam w zwyczaju mądrzyć się na tematy, o których mam dość mgliste pojęcie. Mój konik to lata od 1933-1945 tak najbardziej ogólnie plus zimna wojna. Zostawiam 5 .
Logistyka samej Bitwy według idei Bolesława miała na celu odbicie kuzyna Henryka. Chociaż marne były szanse na powodzenie tego planu.
Henryk miał uciekać, takie było zalecenie jego ojca, lecz nie posłuchał. Uciekające oddziały Bolesława osłabiły tęgiego Księżyca i hufiec młodzików. Prawe skrzydło rozsypka, lewe i centrum broni się i w tej beznadziei myśl pozoru odwrotu? Ciekawe rozstrzygnięcie, choć nie do końca respektowane przez rycerzy. Tutaj ciśnie się na usta pokłon dla sprawiedliwej walki. Jednak kiedy grzech został na barkach Henryka?
Przekapitalnie opisana bitwa kiedy na horyzoncie pojawil się Mściwoj... I nawiązanie do kadmejskiego zwycięstwa i Pyrrusa.
Bardzo, bardzo doskonała wiedza i umiejętność sztuki przekazywania tak ważnych szczegółów z historii podziału Śląska na mniejsze dzielnice. Nie obyło się bez aktów bratobójczych. Choć historia pamięta jednego okrutnika, to czyny innych krewnych wzbudzają równie wielki niesmak, a nawet przerażenie.
Wplotłeś w jednej części dwie kobiety? I pewnie chodzi tutaj o Bolesława Rogatkę, bezwzględnego władcę Legnicy. Prowadził swą awanturniczą politykę i wydawał krocie na najemne oddziały płatnych zbirów.
W ostatniej części sporo dowiadujemy się o nim.
Szacun za dialogi i język staropolski i choć nie jestem historykiem, ani za bardzo nie jestem czytelniczką takiej prozy to uważam, że nie straciłam czasu i dziękuję ci za to. Cała opowieść to taka burleska z lekkim uśmiechem na ustach i sporym kawałem niemęczącej historii.
Ukłony dla Autora i pozdrawiam
Hypokryta a może ty uchylisz przyłbicę zbrojno-kadmejsko-krwisto-erotycznej sceny z hufców nadwornej chorągwi. Wszak henrykowie byli chłopy na schwał.
Pozdrawiam
Na tym właśnie polega stylizacja - nadaje się językowi stary styl, mimo że faktycznie nie używa się historycznego języka. Czasem użycie autentycznych wyrażeń byłoby kłopotliwe, także pod względem źródeł z których można je zaczerpnąć - na przykład odnośnie języka z XV wielu mamy trochę prozy i dokumentów prawniczych, ale już w XII wieku mamy pojedyncze zdania, a polszczyzna dawniejszych czasów to rekonstrukcje. Dobre wyważenie faktycznie jest trudne.
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