,, Nigdy nie pytaj ''
Never ask why!
See how much harm I did to!
You have the audacity to come and beg for forgiveness.
You should fall down and still win.
Why me?
What have I done?
Are you able to answer me one question?
Never say never ! These your words that make no sense.
He laughs with you, for me you are a regular buffoon!
He does not want you in my life.
I want to forget, although I can not really.
I was once at the top and then I fall down.
You do it all happens when I think about you.
You're guilty!
I hate you at the same time I need.
Sometimes I do not know what he wants.
Despite the fact that I'm talking about you the same bad things I love you and need your company
Komentarze (3)
These your words that make no sense. - These ARE your *
He laughs with you, for me you are a regular buffoon! - You either use punctuation in your poems or you don't. There is no happy medium here.
I fall down - fell, past tense.
You do it all happens when I think about you - there is no logical sense to this sentence.
I hate you at the same time I need - need whom, what?
There is a mistake in every other strophe of your poem, so you got a problem with the use of language. Punctuation is almost nonexistent. And when you put it all together it just sound like random sentence mangled up - regular jibber jabber. And above everything else this i a polish website and one of the rules is the texts published on here are supposed to be in polish. I would appreciate if you obliged. Best regards.
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