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'Powiedz mamie
że pies biega dziwnie
po podwórku i sie ślini',
'dobra, pewnie trzeba będzie
go uśpić niedługo', 'chyba Ciebie'
How does the past work in a healthy brain?
Everything that happened in the past
has happened yesterday.
Counting
what has happened,
when did it happen,
thinking about it
when it comes
to relationships
is bad habit,
avoid doing this,
it is a road to hell on earth
it takes away from you
your spontaneous
and natural
behaviour
obviously
ruled (explained) by
logic
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'How does past works in a healthy brain?' -> 'How does the past work in a healthy brain?' (użycie 'does' wyklucza stosowanie formy singular 'works')
'your spontaneus' -> 'your spontaneous'
Niewłaściwe użycie czasu Past Perfect:
'Counting
what has happened,
when it has happened,'
->
'Counting
what has happened,
when did it happen,'
W poniższym kontekście wyrażenie 'logic' jest niepoliczalne, do tego zbytecznie zawiła konstrukcja:
'your spontaneous
and natural
behaviour
to which
obviously
there is
a logic'
->
'your spontaneous
and natural
behaviour
obviously
ruled (explained) by
logic'
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